Magic biscuits
Once there lived two puppies named sugar and cookie they stayed
With their owner Brian in a small house in a village. One day Brian
Went out and bought treats for cookie and sugar, and he wanted
Them to grow bigger, so he brought the magic biscuits. When he
Got home he carefully placed the magic biscuits in their bowl and
Sugar and cookie munched up all of the treats, and they felt weird
Next day sugar and cookie felt different and ran to Brian, and he
Could feel the ground shaking and knew his puppies had turned
Big. He feed the puppies more treats every day until the puppies
Grew bigger but finally Brian had enough of the ground shaking
So he gave his puppies treats that will make them smaller, and
Then he could have better rest.
THE END !!
Hey makeleta, i really like your story. It was really good. I loved it. It reminds me of mine. Maybe next time you can add more describing words.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sascha
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