Friday, June 5, 2020

pobble writing: Magic biscuits



Magic biscuits 


Once there lived two puppies named sugar and cookie they stayed 
         With their  owner Brian in a small house in a village. One day Brian
          Went out and bought  treats for cookie and sugar, and he wanted
           Them to grow  bigger, so he brought the magic biscuits. When he 
           Got home he carefully placed the magic biscuits in their bowl and  
           Sugar and cookie munched up all of the treats, and they  felt weird
            Next day sugar and cookie felt different  and ran to Brian, and he 
            Could  feel the ground shaking and knew his puppies  had turned
            Big. He feed  the puppies more treats every day until the puppies  
             Grew bigger but finally Brian had enough of the ground shaking 
              So he gave his puppies treats that will make them smaller, and 
               Then he could have better rest.
THE END !!   

2 comments:

  1. Hey makeleta, i really like your story. It was really good. I loved it. It reminds me of mine. Maybe next time you can add more describing words.

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